- YOUR PERSONALIZED STRATEGY
- ACTION PLAN
- YOUR RIGHT DIRECTION
- REAL TRACTION
- ANSWERS
- MOVEMENT
- UNDERSTANDING YOUR HANG UPS
- ADDING YOUR WRITER VOLTAGE
- SEE YOUR BLIND SPOTS
- MAKE YOUR STORY BETTER
step by step, you and me will look over every moment in your story.
The Story Roadmap
This is the clarity, insight, and deep dive analysis you need to make sure every story you write delivers. OWN 2026 by learning your Story Roadmap.
answers
If you've ever wondered why your story isn't working, what's wrong with it, why people aren't liking it, the Roadmap will show you key truths you might not even know existed.
Insight
You'll see what story you're actually giving the readers, and have a much clearer understanding of your characters, plot, and stakes.
your personalized success plan
By the end of our time together, you'll have a step-by-step roadmap to follow to make your story so much better.
This is not an outline or beatsheet. It's a deep dive on everything NOT in your outline or beatsheet.
Because heres' the secret: a story is not about moments (which is what outlines and beatsheets excel in). A great story is about movement. The stuff between the beats, the stuff below the story on the page. It's about diving deeper.
You 100% need a Story Roadmap if:
- You feel like your manuscript has become a Rubic's Cube of impossibility. You just can't figure it out.
- You love your idea but you know it's gotten completely lost in the telling.
- Every decision you make feels agonizing. You can't tell which darlings to kill or keep.
- You're story feels boring.
- You're beyond frustrated. You pretty much want to quit.
- You know there's something good about your book but you have no idea how to actually show that.
- You've got a lot of plot threads. A lot. Like, so many you're getting totally tangled in them.
- You want to make sure your book is firing on all cylinders before you start querying the dream agents and/or self pubbing to the masses.
let's not waste any more time.
Here's what you'll get during our session:
focus one: we go over the big idea.
Define and turbocharge your reader promise.
You have to nail this before you even write a word, so you and I are definitely going to make sure yours is exactly what you want it to be.
focus two: we check all the nuance.
Extensively check your characters and their choices.
This is where natural stakes and organic tension lives. If you feel like your book is nothing but scenes, here's where they'll really begin to come together in a full, 10
focus three: we go over every beat.
Rebuild and restructure your cohesion and movement.
If you've ever thought, "my book feels boring" or like nothing is happening, this is where we'll really make sure that there's true activity, consequences, and momentum. All the things you must deliver to your readers if you want them to love your story.
for a limited time
Fast Acting Bonus #1
My Story Roadmap sessions go fast. But if you book by Monday, December 8, you'll receive an extra 40 minute private session three days later, after you've had time to work out your story and try some of the suggested exercises. This will be like a check-in call to make sure that everything is still gelling and clear as you begin to apply your session notes to your manuscript.
Fast Acting Bonus #2
You'll also receive an exclusive critique on your first 30 pages plus query with my in-house editor, Rachael. She's new to the team but a ferocious professional. She'll read your story with fresh eyes and give her feedback on how you've implemented your Roadmap goals and exercises. This is an awesome opportunity to really pressure test your new edits.
DISCLAIMER! Please know that this is a non-refundable, non-transferable purchase. And as much as I'd like, I do not and cannot guarantee any measure of success (such as agent, book deal, sales, etc.)
book your Story Roadmap now
Get the deep dive directions you've been craving. Book your Story Roadmap session for $1,400 (payment plans available) and learn a repeatable, lifelong skill that will help you look at this book and all your future books in a whole new light, so you can draft and edit with so much more precision and impact, giving your book the best chance it has to hook readers from the start.
This is where you take total control of your book and make it undeniable.
DISCLAIMER! Please know that this is a non-refundable, non-transferable purchase. And as much as I'd like, I do not and cannot guarantee any measure of success (such as agent, book deal, sales, etc.)
